Archive for July, 2010

Happy Birthday, Glowkid!

Thursday, July 29th, 2010

Ten years ago today (my, time flies), I was in Washington DC for the RWA conference.  It was the first and only time I’d been to Washington, and I was having a marvelous time.

Nancy the Cat Slayer had come along just for the heck of it, and I was meeting up with Anne Gracie for the first time.  It was also the first time I met Jane Porter, and it was the last time I got to see Grace Green before she retired from writing.

I had  two books (count ‘em!) up for the RITA in the short contemporary category — the Desire, The Stardust Cowboy, and the Presents, Gibson’s Girl. It was a pretty amazing time.

The day the RITAs were being announced, my husband rang me from home to say that something more momentous was about to happy — our daughter, who was expecting a baby in late August, had jumped the gun.  Or the baby had.  It was on its way.

“Call her,” he said.  “She’s already at the hospital.”

So I called. Cool, calm and collected me. I called and they said she wasn’t there.

What????  Not there?

Had they mislaid her?  Good grief!  This was not a large town. There was only one hospital in this particular place in Kansas.  Still is.  I paced and I fumed and I called my husband back and said, “Are you sure?”

And he said, “Yes, I’m sure. Call again.”

I stopped and thought before I called — and then I realized that they hadn’t mislaid her, I’d forgotten her name!

She goes by her middle name — which I’d used.  And she is married, using her married name, which I forgot.  So I asked for her by her middle name and her maiden name — neither of which was on the hospital record.  Sigh.

I called back. Indeed, she was there.  In labor, quite busy. I only talked to her for a moment.  “I’ll call you,” she promised.  “After.”

I went to the RITAs in a daze.  Amazingly, The Stardust Cowboy, won.

As thrilled as I was, it was only the second most wonderful thing that happened that day.

An hour and a half later, Stephanie Alyce was born.

She was the best.  Pretty much still is.

We called her Glowbaby because she was jaundiced and got to wear a cool suit that glowed.  She looked like a caterpillar about to come out of a cocoon when she was wrapped in it.

Now, occasionally, I still call her Glowkid.  It’s still true — most of the time, she just glows.

Today she’s off to see Joseph and His Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat with her mom, her other grandma and one of her aunts.  I’m off to San Francisco for a wedding.

There is another RITA finalist this year, but I’ll be at the wedding celebrating so I won’t know if One Night Mistress…Convenient Wife won or not.  No doubt someone will tell me one way or the other.  I’ll cross my fingers for it, but there are lots of wonderful books up for the RITA.  If it wins, I’ll be thrilled.

But no more thrilled than ten years ago when The Stardust Cowboy won — and Glowkid made her first appearance.

Happy birthday, Steph!

Eureka! The Missing Piece!

Monday, July 26th, 2010

puzzle So I’m writing this book.  And while I’m only finishing chapter one and there will be around ten at the end, I still need to have several pieces of the puzzle in my grasp before I start.

I had most of them.  But I didn’t have one. And, of course, not having it, I didn’t know what it would turn out to be.

Far be it  from me to actually think in terms of ‘theme.’  The very word makes me break out in hives.

And yet . . .

save the cat strikes back I was rereading Save the Cat Strikes Back, by the late Blake Snyder the other day and thinking about his ‘beat sheet’ and trying to put the pieces that I had into his scheme so I could see where the gaps were.  And I figured out where the piece was supposed to go and what it was supposed to do  – though I had no idea what it was.

It’s that little bit that Blake identified where someone says something important early on in the book that sets the stage for the story. It’s an inconsequential thing that you don’t realize is there but it shines a quick light on the theme (there’s that word again) that the story goes on to develop.

Me? Develop a theme?  Not likely.

And yet . . .

I sat there thinking about that idea – breaking out in hives — and then I thought, “Hey, I’ve already written that part. Let’s go back and see if some minor character accidentally and unknowing said something inconsequential but providential.”

And, believe it or not, one had!

Eureka.  And all that.

I recognized the possibility of the significant line last night.  But I didn’t see exactly how the words tossed out a theme until I woke up this morning and it was right there, staring me in the face. 

I could see it all then. I could see how that one remark related to the hero’s growth, how it related to the heroine’s, how the two reflected each other, and ultimately how the book had to play out to develop that theme.  I grabbed my computer (didn’t even reach for the Benadryl, though maybe I should have to be safe), sat down with it on my lap and started to type.

I typed a lot. It all made sense.  I didn’t finish chapter one, and I didn’t start chapter two. But now I have the whole emotional throughline of Nick and Edie’s story worked out.

Thanks, Blake.

More Men in Shorts

Friday, July 23rd, 2010

As if World Cup soccer weren’t enough (and it wasn’t), I have been enjoying mornings this month with the Tour de France.

cycling legs More very fit men in shorts. This time on bicycles, using up God knows how many calories a day riding and riding and riding.  Inspiring.

And it’s even more inspiring this year because we inherited my mother’s large screen high definition television set.  Used as we were to small and grainy pictures, our eyes are bugging at the clarity and definition. ‘High’ hardly seems to describe it.  It should be called ‘intense.’

I am reminded of a time when a friend made us a recipe for some soup she’d learned to make chinese broth while spending a summer in Chinatown. It was delicate, light, amazing soup – and also, as her sister said, “thinner than water.”

Well, the Tour de France in high definition is clearer than real. Sharper than anything.  And the scenery in France (the grass and trees and buildings and stuff – not just the men!) is amazing.  In a word, wow.

It is even causing me to dream in high definition. I close my eyes and see things more clearly. Why is that? 

Fortunately I’m seeing Nikolas and Edie fairly clearly at the moment.  Particularly him. Now that he has finally deigned to make an appearance under his real name, he seems hi-def almost. Interestingly, though, he still hasn’t told Edie who he is.

He’s ‘waiting for the opportunity,’ he tells me.

Sly, that’s what he is.

kate walker I’m working away on him, and envying Kate Walker who has jaunted off to Caerleon for a week’s writers’ workshop.  She has to teach, of course. But you can bet she’ll be enjoying it as well.

I was supposed to be there this year.  But life intervened.  It’s better for Nikolas and Edie that I’m not, that I’m finally getting some work done on them. 

Still I’ll be thinking of Kate and Trisha Ashley and lots of other writers who will be enjoying an inspiring week – and hoping I can get there some day soon.  I’m always refreshed by those sorts of workshops.

Have you been to writers’ workshops or conferences or readers groups? What refreshes and inspires you?